Review Detail of DragoPackMan in Yin & Yang Pleasures of Cultivation

it indeed a click bait no r-18 scene until 200+ chapter i don't even know if this novel can reach that much chapter

so still there is no r18 ?

He's blatantly lying. The first r-18 scene comes in chapter 84.

Like I said a blatant lie, the first R-18 scene comes in chapter 84.

half ass r-18 scene just abit foreplay and a few thrust that why i don't count that shit

lol that name is misleading (I thought this novel is dual cultivation novel when i read it)

ok even without r18 it's good so will read it. gl in u r novel😊

the novel it self is good that why i don't want to ruin it ratings by rate it 1 star and be a bitch that rate everything one star because i don't like it. but your first half ass r-18 scene not worth waiting 84 episodes you could have just skip the scene and say they did the deed and move on with the story and even tho i can't write but i seen enough to know it good or bad.

that why many people complaining about it.

I see. Well, I'm always open to discussion. Can you explain to me why you didn't like the scene? And what are some things I can improve on then for the next scenes?

this is purely my opinion. first of all too much foreplay you write 7 page(read on my mobile btw) of it while they are in heat not only that it ruining the scene they take away the immersion they were in heat they're suppose to get aggressive at each other until darcel about to put his thing in and when he about to aggressively put it in he becomes clear mind alittle bit because he afraid he might hurt her and that how it should go you should know where to put a romatic scene or just straight to *** scene, and second problem in my opinion the *** scene itself it is too short and it's boring why ? because like i said above they were in heat in that scene you should write about the aggressive *** positions like doggy-style or spooning where they can go ham while kissing each other, and on top of that they can discover each others fetishist, but you only write about they **** like animal and that it. it's disappointing me.

I see, I understand what you mean. When reading back the scene to myself and other novels with R-18, yea the *** itself is very lacking in detail. Even for my second *** scene, it wasn't as immersive or descriptive it could be. This was actually very helpful, thanks

Hahaha this is a good novel if you want ****, only go xvideos (although the author did a bit of clickbeit...)

**** got boring after some time that y I chose *** with plot like h-manga and smut novel and I don't think i m in wrong here (this is not hate review )

you do know what a written erotica with plot is ?

I don't know if you'll read this comment but if you do I'll (just my view) like to suggest that u take a look a [Profane prince of Domination] novel just for reference purpose of the r-18 part coz that one is a real detailed blockbuster... please reply if u r still open to future suggestions and all the best for your novel 😇😇

WTF!!!!!!!!!!! REALLY??? THK BROTHER!!!!!!!!!

Really?, I've been stacking this for like 5 months when this story has around 40-50 chapters and this is what I got?(😭) Good thing I stopped using passes in this story early

The title and the tags is the only reason I have this on my library, I'm expecting a story something like dual cultivation but it seems its not one of those book