Great story with great potential and ability to be the next big unique thing on Webnovel. The characters are diverse and the tone of the story is really good. Really happy to have stumbled on this diamond in the rough. Keep at it author👍.

A goodie with a lot of potential that can still be unraveled. Hmnn. How can I help to make this work shine more? I humbly suggest using Hemingway's free desktop app to improve sentence flow, while using the free Grammarly app to deal with a few grammar mistakes. I hope I manage to help. May the author write more, edit more, learn more, and later...earn more.

An interesting story! You build up the tension very slowly, but nicely! Addictive storyline, expressive characters, alluring descriptions! Well done! All the best with it!

Good night author I must say that your story has given me a very pleasant surprise. Very well developed characters, very good narration and grammar. Keep it up, you are doing very well. I already added this story to my library.

With the desert setting and assassins, at first i thought that this is an assasin creed story. But i was mistaken. It is even better. This is a land of demons and beasts. I really like the dangerous setting of the story plus it seems that the female lead has a group of friends too. Thanks for the awesome story! Chapter 9 may need reposting. There are many shades caused by webnovel.

I’m not much for female lead stories but I do love dark stories. Dark stories are my favorite. Your story is really good and captivating but the problems are grammar and the introduction of so many characters overwhelmed me, I was lost for a second on who the MC was. On one sentence, you accidentally went first person point of view and please remember to break up the paragraphs sometimes. Other than those problems your story is going really well and you pacing is on point. Keep up the good work!

The story is well written and is filled with tension so far. The action is written well. The characters are interesting and there's always something going on so the story doesn't feel like it's going too slowly.

Sooooooo, I see everyone reviewing their work... and now I'm going to do mine I guess. Well, its strange being as that I am writing a tragic tragedy story and building a world around it. I can't be open or speak much about the lore of the world lol since its kind of ending. I would say my series requires some patience not because it takes long to get good but because the characters are in a dark, dark world. it's really hard to root for anyone because this is a really grounded gritty series. Yes, there are powers but There's no Kamehameha's, or I slapped the seven gods. Or godly system powers to beat. , it's just very normal people who are fighting to survive but when the enemy is a whole entity a state, not an individual. Its hard to root for anyone or even follow the lead. That's why I've made multiple leads, the story is about Aya but extends as everything caves back in and into chaos. In short words, it's just a story about being ****ed over in life! [img=faceslap]

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