Review Detail of mssuigeneris in All Started with a Phone Call

Hello! I find stories like these really refreshing in this platform full of fantasy fictions and other highly imaginative stuff. I myself have a slice-of-life work (I'm writing two stories), and I can say that only very few people can appreciate works like this. To start of, I would like to commend the author's grammar and word usage. Its smooth and perfect for this kind of novel. Second, I've noticed that the pacing is tad bit slow. But that's not uncommon, because the build up takes time for a work that embraces reality. Thirdly, I like how real the characters seem. It feels like I know them or something. Overall, this one is great for light readers. Good luck, author!