Review Detail of chadliu221 in I Know the Secret to Surpass Level 100

So I think the idea that this story is about is interesting (that's what got me into this) but I read the first 3 chapters and I'm pretty sure I can say that while the idea is interesting, the character designs are pretty bad, things seem quite forced and just appear out of nowhere, the grammar is horrible and you can barely tell what is going on throughout the chapters. The story also doesnt really explain why things happen and that it just happens randomly causing quite a lot of people to be confused. Hopefully things are more smooth in the latter chapters, and I recommend the author to re-edit the first few chapters because it actually doesnt make sense. Read at your own risk