Didn’t read most chapter but from the first few i could already see that your grammer and formating is fine Anyone that is looking for an unreasonably OP MC would probably enjoy your story Sadly for me when the MC dosent earn any of his power and breaks the “rules” of said world for no reason but being OP the story stops being interesting Good luck with your writing
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