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BeiWolf

BeiWolf

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2017-06-01 JoinedIsrael
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  • BeiWolf
    BeiWolf2mth
    Posted

    The good : the author has a great attitude and is willing to consider the criticism he recives and improve The bad : some grammar and spelling errors , some worng character names and most importantly an MC who is so overpowered the plot most likely wont stay relevant with him in it

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    Shinobi Life!
    Anime & Comics · UchihaFanatic
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  • BeiWolf
    BeiWolf3mth
    Replied to Xenoxide

    You should stop writing nonsense so people wont waste their time

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    The Arrancar
    Anime & Comics · DukeNeaffy
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  • BeiWolf
    BeiWolf3mth
    Posted

    The idea is interesting but the grammer and inconsistency’s are ruining it for me Names of places, people and terms are just often wrong and the dialogue formatting makes it feel very static

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    erased....
    Anime & Comics · Uncle_Deadpool
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  • BeiWolf
    BeiWolf3mth
    Replied to going_into_unknown

    That or the author just doesn’t care about the premise anymore

    Ch 15 Chapter 15
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    The Tutorial is Too Hard for Douluo Dalu
    Anime & Comics · IHaveNthToDo
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  • BeiWolf
    BeiWolf3mth
    Posted

    Original wish fulfillment story The premise is good but the OP MC and the lack of showing events kind of ruins its potential Well at least the author is having fun 💪🏻

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    The informant
    Anime & Comics · Random_Author
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  • BeiWolf
    BeiWolf3mth
    Commented

    Mental corruption ? Not mental corruption resistance or mind resistance or mental fortitude ? 😅

    Ch 13 A Godly Prize
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    The Tutorial is Too Hard for Douluo Dalu
    Anime & Comics · IHaveNthToDo
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  • BeiWolf
    BeiWolf4mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter coach So... have you been enjoying some good cultivation story lately ? Because some of the dialogue this time is a little unusual 😅

    Ch 674 V2 ch146
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    The Hitting Zone
    Competitive Sports · half_empty
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  • BeiWolf
    BeiWolf4mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter man I actually like this fic better than jade emperor possibly because i like the first Doulou dalu better

    Ch 8 Battle
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    The Tutorial is Too Hard for Douluo Dalu
    Anime & Comics · IHaveNthToDo
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  • BeiWolf
    BeiWolf4mth
    Replied to Alexander_the_grey

    He is a year younger cause in your book , in canon he is a 3 years above Harry 😜

    Ch 119 Ch. 118 7th year goals
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    HPRP (New Chapters in fanfic section version)
    Fantasy · Alexander_the_grey
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  • BeiWolf
    BeiWolf4mth
    Commented

    It’s nice that he is giving Cedric a role but I’m pretty sure he is also a 7th year during the fourth book

    Ch 119 Ch. 118 7th year goals
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    HPRP (New Chapters in fanfic section version)
    Fantasy · Alexander_the_grey
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  • BeiWolf
    BeiWolf4mth
    Replied to SirDemiLich

    Respect

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    Douluo dalu : infinity
    Eastern Fantasy · SirDemiLich
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  • BeiWolf
    BeiWolf4mth
    Commented

    Headmaster Grindewald? Didn’t know Dumbledore kept his husband name 😅

    Ch 8 Start of the Year
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    The Lost Heir (A Harry Potter Fanfic)
    Fantasy · MapleLeaves
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  • BeiWolf
    BeiWolf4mth
    Posted

    Didn’t read most chapter but from the first few i could already see that your grammer and formating is fine Anyone that is looking for an unreasonably OP MC would probably enjoy your story Sadly for me when the MC dosent earn any of his power and breaks the “rules” of said world for no reason but being OP the story stops being interesting Good luck with your writing

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    The All-Encompassing Douluo
    Anime & Comics · Life_of_Meat
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  • BeiWolf
    BeiWolf4mth
    Replied to Prometheus2000

    Troll

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    Pokemon: Dream or Reality
    Anime & Comics · trainer_tyranitar
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