Review Detail of Jo_J in OUTRUNNING TIME

In your story, you deal with many very difficult issues, such as suicide, rejection, mother's trauma after the child's death, life after death, or the existence of spiritual beings, and many other related issues. The plot is intriguing and your main characters are also. Well done! I hope Ophelia will overcome her traumas, deal with the rejection, understands her mother... and Xavier will understand that life is not easy for anyone... One thing ;) For the future, remember that jumping between POVs shows the imperfection of the author's workshop.