Review Detail of LyingCrowPromises in Of Gods and Myths

Love the story. So far, all of the things that happened are intriguing and make me want to read more. Story development, character design, world background are all impeccable, having the charm I really enjoyed. I could imagine the looks of every character, and I enjoyed it. The only thing I have problem with is the author's grammar. Find an editor fix those trivialities. Although it's not that big, it can be bothersome. Anyway, continue writing this as much as you want or can, because you have a great piece in your hands.