This story is a good read. I like how we got to see the MC's life before he died, it really gives us a good insight to his character and his motivations. We get to see the MC's thought process throughout which were very realistic and compelling. He doesn't get dark and neither does this story become a quest for revenge which is pretty awesome, it shows he is mature and rational which I love in a character. There's a few minor errors with punctuation and grammar but that can easily be fixed with a proofread. So far the story is interesting and I'd love to see more. Keep up the good work.
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