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2020-10-31 11:36

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JKaiya
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Summary of chapter1 *After surviving a disaster where 700,000 people died including his father and him getting injured* MC: "Hey mom," the MC said seriously, "I have a system, lets spend our entire fortune with no backup plans to buy a monster pet shop." Mom: Seeing the serious eyes the mother believed him instantly no questions asked. -Boom! Shop bought, but their circumstances are too poor that they dont even have enough for blankets and utilities. But its ok, we spend everything for our MC because we r side characters. But... its ok! System is magical and gave them some stuff so u can do thinga like potty!- Their Family: Our dad died. We have no feelings. We got compensation so lets add that to the store. Bye dad. Maybe we'll use u 4 some filler later. Plot Armor: After a surviving a few cringe moments, Plot Armor is here to save the day! Dont worry cause every1 has a system, lets just explain it right before they go in the store/house and after everything else so u can get ba-ba-bam-ba-bamboozled. But its okay, I am mighty Plot Armor! U r MC so I award u with magical system that can talk and do more as u saved people and got hurt! Me: Wait u were hurt? It described him pefectly fine though... Sister: Wow! More Sister: Wow! *Start next chapter?* 'Erm...' =Side note pretty sure author deletes reviews as there's only 3 reviews for a novel with 73ish chapters which is unbelievable. So I'll be back if u delete me since I hate authora who abuse. :)= If your author and bother to listen and not be tilted then try to explain things more like with putting more details for example emotions. Also try to think on how people would actually act. The charcters felt flat/illogica to me. Other than that its prob better to put every human getting a system before u went into the other stuff as it seriously made it hard for me to get into the story after spotting a plot hole than a super obvious big filler half way into the chapter a few paragraphs later. Also this is obviously too late but naming the country (I think it was) Petrika made me face palm more as theres literally pet in the name. It felt cringey to me since I read a lot. Overall the story had a fast update speed for originals while the quality solely basing it off the first chapter was little below average. Youll get better overtime though, guessing author was a newbie

DreamyFatCat
DreamyFatCatLv10
xAsura_
xAsura_Lv14

Well, first of all, I'll say that I love this novel. Now why do I love it and why the 5 stars will be explained. (I'm at the 100th chapter) 1. Writing quality - While the authors makes some minor mistakes here and there, the grammar is above 90% of the novels on this app. Moreover, if you spot an error and write it in the commentary section, the author will fix it. As such, I gave this section 5 stars. 2. Updating stability - Since I started this novel, the author has released 2 chapters per day every day without forgetting or taking a day off. So, I'll give this section 5 stars. 3. Story development - This novel is going great. It is neither too slow nor too fast, just perfect (even tho I would have loved for the character to increase his cultivation and his number of tamed monsters faster. However, I'm not the author so, I won't be mad for that haha). Secondly, we see that the story has a goal and it's getting more and more interesting to read the novel as the chapters increases. So, I'm giving a 5 stars here. 4. Character design - For the characters, we see a development in how the act and how they improve upon themselves. I totally love how they develop their own characters and we can easily see the improvement. I rarely read something which has such a perfect character development so, 5 stars straigt. 5. World background The world background is well written and developped. I really have nothing more to say here since I don't want to spoil anyone. However, I will for a certain point since it could make a lot of readers drop it. In this world, systems exists for everyone but they are basics. However, there exists cheat systems or super system as I like to call them. There have been a few of those systems and only the top of the world and their user knows about them. So, it's not actually necessary to 'hide' their system like in other novels. Well, there are a lot of explanation and you'll understand it as long as you give it a chance. So, for such an exceptional world background and difference in system, I decided to give it 5 stars. I hope you enjoy this great novel cause I sure do! Have a great day, and thank you author for writing such an incredible story!

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