This is a lot darker than what I'm usually used to reading, haha. So far, pretty good. Quality is quite good, though there were a few spots that had some grammatical errors, but those can be fixed with a quick edit. The author conveys a lot of emotion through the different character POVs, so good job author. Keep writing!
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