Review Detail of JimboG18 in Monarch of Time

All I have to say is well done sir! What astounds me more is that this is an original and not a translation of an already famous novel. The quality of the novel is far above what I usually read from this site and from many other original and translated works. Although the chapters themselves seem kind of short for my taste, the story itself is very interesting and just my cup of tea. Although there are some typical cliches and deus ex machina elements in the story, I still think that they aren't too horribly done nor are they too exaggerated, and having some face slapping moments in the story is just my kind of vibe. However, there were a few inconsistencies and illogical inaccuracies in the story which I've noticed, like the number of disciples a section would have, and their contrasting power levels, as well as very convenient and inconsistent "rules" for certain events like going into a zone which doesn't allow anyone above spirit realm in, but just coincidently, the strongest people that would go in is just with a few minor realms which our MC could handle, well they're still forgivable, and can just be somewhat brushed off. So as far as chapter 703, I'm still very engaged with the story, and I'm still very much excited into reading what happens next. So kudos for keeping my interest and attention, and hoping to read more of this fine novel of yours. cheers 🍻