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EnderPLLv64yr
2020-10-06 03:21

Really good novel! Let’s start ! Writing quality: Perfect. Easy and smooth reading, no mistakes and all cool! Stability of updates: Here we have missed days from time to time so 4* as it’s not so often. Story development: Nice and creative. Really fun to read (except some chapters about business but nothing serious). Character design is realistic even with system implementation, just some of mc decisions from time to time seem irrational (like he had good business but now he doesn’t want to do it again as he has sport and does something else. Like really, did anyone protest that they have too much money? The only decision in the novel that for me seem bizzare. He could allow his mother to take care of it as she is housewife with 2 ***** children and ex bankier. Always assurence for family “Just in case”. World background normal but you can see the Author though it through. Overall I would really recommend the novel for all to read!

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Don’t really know why word “A D U L T” is censored ...

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