Review Detail of Fantasy1over in My Pick Up Artist System

Writing Quality: Amazing as usual Updating Stability: Amazing but now I'm just greedy for more chapters after catching up. Story Development: Amazingish. The story gets way better after chapter 100, at least for me. The comedy however will always be good and make anyone laugh. Character Design: Amazingish. While the characters aren't as fleshed out in the beginning, they do later in the story after a while. World Background: Goodish. The world isn't explained much in the beginning but is expanded upon in the later chapters a little. Personal Thoughts: While I was irritated slightly by the slow pacing in the beginning as well as some smaller aspects, it later becomes better and easier to read as the MC matures and the story develops. I can officially say it's one of my favorite novels now. You were right Author, the story does get way better. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]