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KatyushaAkame
KatyushaAkameLv134yr
2020-11-03 03:27

When i first saw the Cover and Name i thought this would be like every other System Novel around here but apon a recommendation from a freind and reading the Summery i must say this novel keeps blowing me away! The comedy is spot on and dosnet pull any punches which i adore. Every new chapter seems to draw me deeper into the world and made me genuinely care about the Protagonist of this story and relate to the obstacles he must go through to move on. The Foreshadowing and the Suspense building makes me eagerly wait every new Chaper release to get my fix and with the speed in which the chapers are releasing i must say their is never a dull moment in my reading sessions as i eagerly await a chaper update notification while at home or at work. This has some Amazing potential and i cant wait to be here as it rises the ranks to the top! So as a summery, Amazing Pacing aswell as comedy and character development, sprinkle in the Occasion NSFW scenes and suspense and you have what i consider one of if not the best up and coming Novel ive read! I highly recommend this to anyone looking for a good novel to sink their litterary teeth into you wont regret it! P.s Sorry for how long this reveiw this is my first one and this novel is so good i could resist writing one down! you could say this novel took my first~

My Pick Up Artist System

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Javier_Raddo
Javier_RaddoLv10

I came into this story to laugh so imagine my shock when I met my girlfriend using the tips inside!!! I didn’t know there were lots of real dating tips before I read the story, but when I read the other comments, I learned I wasn’t the only one to meet girls from this! Even though I still laughed every chapter(this is the funniest novel on here btw, by far), I got more than I ever expected out of it! It was totaly unexpected. People pay lots of money for this kind of sage advice! Thank you author! Please keep writing this unbelievable book!

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klew
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I suck at reviews, I am one of those silent readers who never do any commenting and reviewing. But when I do write about a book, I take it seriously. This book has the potential to become one of those top must read. And I say that because I did a similar review (and my only other review) with Einlion's EPIC work back when it was still early in the story. The events that take place in this story are becoming more and more fluid as the author continues to write. You can really see the progression as more chapters come out. Chapter releases are being pushed out at a very satisfying momentum and the comedy is like a breath of fresh air when you are bogged down in the trenches of all these other novels😂😂 TLDR; READ THE BOOK YOU WON'T BE DISAPPOINTED

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Terahan
TerahanLv15

Most deserving 5 🌟 to date! Excelent pacing with well thought-out characters in some unexpectedly hilarious situations. P.S. Try not grin like a naive innocent at least once a chapter. I dare ya!

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44stormy
44stormyLv10

I’m a girl, and well, the relationship stuff in the novel’s pretty accurate... Besides that, I’m enjoying the book. I don’t read ML ever, but a friend told me this one was really funny so I gave it a try. It surpassed my expectations :) Also loved the author’s replies in the comments, like an extra layer of funny. Don’t miss those!

4yr
Eskimo_Chan_Pro
Eskimo_Chan_ProLv1

This is a very creative and funny web novel. The author also included art of the characters involved so as to help the readers better visualise and imagine. Good book

4yr
gavvas
gavvasLv15

This is by far the most hilarious webnovel i have ever read. I found myself laughing until my stomach hurts multiple times in the same chapters. I would reccomend this to annyone. Bonus points for giving actual useful advice for picking up girls

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JershonTheWriter
JershonTheWriterLv3

great Novel I recomend reading it, its literally funny and it would just make you laugh so much.... btw i tried the technique and damm it work, i got myself a date with an asian girl and i will literally do everything that i need to do to make this hot asian girl to be interested in me😏

4yr
Fantasy1over
Fantasy1overLv15

Writing Quality: Amazing as usual Updating Stability: Amazing but now I'm just greedy for more chapters after catching up. Story Development: Amazingish. The story gets way better after chapter 100, at least for me. The comedy however will always be good and make anyone laugh. Character Design: Amazingish. While the characters aren't as fleshed out in the beginning, they do later in the story after a while. World Background: Goodish. The world isn't explained much in the beginning but is expanded upon in the later chapters a little. Personal Thoughts: While I was irritated slightly by the slow pacing in the beginning as well as some smaller aspects, it later becomes better and easier to read as the MC matures and the story develops. I can officially say it's one of my favorite novels now. You were right Author, the story does get way better. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

4yr
Ukiyo7
Ukiyo7Lv4

the writing is amazing, the word play and comedy is great. the characters are amazing too, the girls are likeable and sort of normal. it has amazing references, almost like Gintama with some chapters being a parody

4yr
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