Review Detail of Scott_Gorsuch in Reincarnated as a Cat girl

There will be some more background building later, however if there is anything specific you want to know, or think would be a good thing to add, I'm sure I could incorporate it, and it may help make the story feel more complete. With Oreo, I may or may not have forgotten he could do that.

Thank you for the input I really do appreciate it.

does this story have romance? And if so, will it be yuri?

Depends, romance would have to be incorporated after everyone is a little older, however I could see it going either way. I have three romantic partners that I could really develop given the time, two of which are girls so, to answer your question, it's a possibility.

Hi Space_Kitten, I am busy reading through the novel a 2nd time and can see some areas where it would be beneficial to rewrite and add dialogue. I know this will be a pain, so I am willing to help with it if possible.

adding dailogue here and there, describing the way they feel with words. think of the emotions of each character and make them act accordingly. For example: "Where have you been?! I've been so worried about you!!" Jacklyn exclaimed as tears rolled of her delicate cheeks. something like that

Also, to prevent any spoilers via the commenting back and forth. What is your discord? if you have one. Only for talking about this stuff, is it fine?