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2020-08-17 12:34

i did not expect that the author to write well in english as she said in one of her disclaimers that it was not her first language. i noticed some punctuation errors and mispelled word but everything looked fine. the book is easy to read so far. nothing much to talk about yet but the synopsis sounds really interesting and i finally found a character who was reacting like a human waking up in another person's body ๐Ÿ˜‚ added to my library will update my review

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