Review Detail of john_babcock in The Crafter and The Slug

I'm sorry for your loss. My condolence`s. I`ve been there it really sucks! I love your story it is very imaginative. I really like the slice of live and ordinary day to day living vibe for these extraordinary people. I think your going for, the juxtaposition of these powerful people trying to live the quiet life in the Marvel Universe just tickles me pink , It begs to wonder how many other powerful people are doing the same in the Marvel Universe, Maybe it something you want to play around with. (yours truly john Babcock)