OMG this blow my mind! Your writing is incredible it is as if I'm reading a published novel. All your characters are alive and engaging and your alternate characters perspectives are amazing. Giving a richness to the story I highly enjoyed. The inversion of expectation for J.R.R. Tolkien dark lord is genius and very surprising and original too. This is not easy to do. You do it very well and make it seem effortless. I can't wait to see what you do with the next chapters! Your newest fan John Babcock

I love John Carter of mars .I can't wait to see what you do with it.I'm a long time fan .I own all the books and read them too.When I started Reading John carter of Mars series It broke My heart That it Was unComplete. I was Truly frustrated that The series that I I loved End in a Cliffhanger.You're writing style is Very close To the spirit and heart Of the original books.I Also Love what Your Doing with The original character It changes everything without changing the contacts and What happens around the Original character it is genius! I have Always thought That the Metaphysical Was always left on the table. John carter is a Metaphysical being.He Was to Much of A Musclehead To figure This out.So If you Combine John carter's Physical And fighting prowess With Metaphysics And psionics. Which is the Only magic System in The books And it's Just just lying there. On the Table to Never be Picked up And used!😤 I Thank your Using Everything That Was implied but Never used Which Is amazing because it Changes everything without changing the world And you Get a completely different and exciting story with Very good Balance Of The old and The New that you are Trying with Great delicacy to Achieve. It is not An Easy thing to Do .Whatsoever😤😠😤😊!!!May you Always find Water May your blade always be razor sharp And your enemies lie Dead At Your feet Rendered asunder(BARSOOM FOREVER)Yours truly John Babcock! !!!!!😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😀😀😀😀😀

I never thought Thor would be lonely .That he Would be Isolated bye He's on Power And him Being All bro code Is really Funny .So Him finding someone who He thinks is as Strong or Stronger then himself And This being the Impetus to Improve himself is Fascinating. I never thought of It this Way And him Finding someone that He Thanks he Can relate too. I Think Has Revealed a Bit of Instability In his personality .You know He got a little Crazy in The head! To see this Is Funny Really funny laugh out loud funny I can't stop laughing funny Oh stop my side's hurt I'm going to die funny Oops I think I've die of Laughter!!!!! May I Rest in Peace/Giggles Yours truly Can't stop laughing

ooo'man ooo'man ooo'man !!!!! I love the hulk and you putting him in a fantasy setting blows my mind in excitement and toe wiggling glee ! I'm a D.M. of Dungeons & Dragons and a comic book fan of long-standing. I've always wanted to see the hulk in a Dungeons & Dragons like world . He would be the perfect O.P. barbarian/monk and without Bruce Banner's moral compass, the hulk can really let loose ! O' the carnage the sweet destruction the unmitigated color of rage as if seeing a emerald hydrogen bomb detonating again and again non-stop !!! I can't stop giggling in HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! GLEE!!! Do not ever drop this rage on to the very end!!!!! Like The Incredible Hulk do not go quietly in to the gentle good night RAGE RAGE against the dying of the emerald light!!!!

I`M so glad you're back it's been a long time since I've seen you. Congratulations on your new family, Now hopefully you can write regular installments to this great story, I'm a huge fan of Star Trek and Voyager in particular. The idea of Voyager having an enforcement arm is really funny and it being a Sith Lord to boot is awesome I cannot wait to see what happens next , Voyager should have been a battleship what with how deadly the Delta quadrant is. Having a Sith Lord balance this out is brilliant . Having the Sith Lord as a cruel practical soldierly sounding board to offset Kathryn Janeway gentle egalitarianism is awesome. A great way to generate drama and the culture shock is getting splashed all over the place FUN !!!!! (yours truly John Babcock)

I'm sorry for your loss. My condolence`s. I`ve been there it really sucks! I love your story it is very imaginative. I really like the slice of live and ordinary day to day living vibe for these extraordinary people. I think your going for, the juxtaposition of these powerful people trying to live the quiet life in the Marvel Universe just tickles me pink , It begs to wonder how many other powerful people are doing the same in the Marvel Universe, Maybe it something you want to play around with. (yours truly john Babcock)

This is really great. I have Been a Dungeons and Dragons master For over 20 years And in My Game .I Have a Very Rare Class usually A non Player Character class But can Be played By A Player.The class Is called a Magesmith .My world could not Function Without them. They make All the Magical weapons and Armor Of My world.It tickles me Pink To see This Pop Into somebody else's Imagination .I cannot wait To see what You Do With it.I have Flushed out This particular class In My Dungeons and Dragons World's It Is A Quintessential Keystone Of my Worlds.The System You have would be Called A class In My world.So that fits Perfectly for This Fan fiction.As I stated Before .I Have had This System/Class For a Very long Time And Wish to Help You out Oh Great author With these suggestions.One Of Major abilities of This class is Identifying Materials And Making Metal alloys Because The World Is covered In A Magical field.it Does crazy things to Common materials like Aluminum ,Cole, Carbon, steel, and Other such materials.Including Monster parts And other monster Materials.The Magesmith In my world Has the Ability Of a high Level Mage or Wizard. Plus the Skills of A Grand grandmaster Smith At least.This means Because they Are wizards and spellcasters they Have access to A high Level of Academia/Trade skills Such as Alchemy Research And Development .Spell theory, Metallurgy, The magical sciences called Spell craft Magical Xeonbiology To Identify Materials For magical Forging /Smelting.If they Have Not set Up Shop Openly .Being Wizards They Are Usually very Secretive And can Be seen Wandering in The most unusual Far Out Places. looking for Some ancient tone On Metallurgy Or spells Or in A for Distant abandoned mine.that Is played out in Conventional eyes But to the Magesmith Is a Metallurgic Wonderland Of Unusual Metal deposits Useless or Unknown to Anyone else.So there Is Definite narrative Hooks For your Main character To be On an Adventures or Looking for some Material Or monsters For his/Hers MageCraft .The possibilities are endless And It has been known in My world for The MageSmith To reach legendary levels Of Power And Mysticism Reaching for Beyond what Is considered magic or Science For that Matter. For them anything Is eventually possible! So I Cannot wait To See what You do With them.It is Delightful And Unexpected To see Something I thought Only existed in My on On Imagination And Dungeon and Dragon's game Appear In someone else's imagination.Yours truly Brother in Imagination John babcock.

Oh my god Finally somebody sent Cipher to Asgard To learn About runes I cannot tell you how Madden And enraged I was when I bought the original comic Where cipher goes to asgard And I thought Finally he's going to learn ruins And become a magic user his power is designed even niched For this Very purpose And I was giggling When aesir Ask him to Stay and Learn Magic their language and runes To only I have that Dashed To the Floor And have My hopes completely shattered When they Had Him say No i Almost Rage quit Reading New Mutants When that Happened I cannot Tell you My utter Absolute delight Toes wiggling Mad scientist cacking eye rolling Milk the Cow kind of stuff Ha-ha ha-ha Ha-ha ha ha-ha ha ha-ha ha-ha ha-ha ha-ha!!!!!!!!!!! Oh magnificent all powerful Author you are filling one of my Comic book nerdy Dreams Never stop ever stop This is The Shiznik You have Reach down Into my Nerdy comic book brain and Scratched A Colossal massive itch Oh my god that Feels so good Author please never stop Scratching This nerdy Itch of Mine Yours truly Can't stop Giggling absolutely blown Away!

This is the best slice of life I've ever eaten.!! it was delicious🍕🍕🍕!!! I most have more of this pie!! never stop baking!! I love this hand made dough called (narrative) and all the scrumptious topping (character development) This is definitely a deep dish Chicago style pie (awesome story) I'll never stop eating it even if my brain becomes obese at least I'll go out happy😁😁😁!!!

Dear All Powerful Author your really killing it !!! I love what you are doing.I have a question though about ciphers power's and it occurred to me that he's ability is based on the very foundation of thought and symbols which are how we manipulate thought and through this process the world around us .I just don't know what this could mean for your story.The potential is I think boundless for it .be it magic/p.s.i./reality altering or getting the source code of the universe and become a speaker or tapping into into the spectrum of the plane of thought itself!! I can't wait till the next installment your really fulfilling the character true potential.I 'm cheering for 😤!!!

Dear All Powerful Author, I just read your story,and it is the best Hulk Fan Fiction I have ever seen. You've captured the very heart/spirit/essence of the Hulk. Which I think is about pain,rage, and power and through these ultimately obtaining freedom!!! The Hulk is my favorite character of all time. I have two signed copys by the late great Mr. Stan Lee the pope of comic books himself. I had the honor to meet and talk with him before he grabbed a burning chariot to heaven. I think he would not mind what you are doing in this fan fiction. I hope that you see this to the end because there are very few to no authors who truly understand the character as you seen to do. I await your next chapter with nail biting glee😤😤😤😤😄😄😄!!!!!!!!

This is awesome ! I've never thought about warhammer much but this has blown me away! the idea of the drops reload is so bright 🌞 I need sunglasses!!! I'm am a D@D master for a long time and I think that putting a space Maine in a D@D setting is a wonderful idea 💡!!!! So maybe later on he can find some combat or P.S.I. skill scrolls or books and some promotions to a higher rank win he L.V. up in the drops.I hope this helps with your story and can't wait to see what happens next. I hope that you see it to the end and don't drop it because I'm cheering for you😤😤😤😁😁😁😁😤😤😁😁!!!!!!!!!

I love your story don't ever stop this is the best thing I've seen in a long time and the effort your spending on all the character development is awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you see it to the end😤😤😤😁😁😤😤

How about communication 's inc. Well anyway maybe you'd give him mintel gifts like photographic memory or eidetic memory for his main power's are of the mind and with chi he could improve his I.Q. And all aspects of the mind .it gives me great pleasure to see what you are doing with this fanfic to no end it my toes wiggle in delight!!! So wonderful author don't give up for I'm cheering for you and can't wait to read what you write next .so you're truly in breath holding awe😮!!!!! Johnbabcock100

I love this story . Finally in a story like this the MC looks around and say 's w.t.f!! Is wrong With these people? And what is the toxic social obsession with face and social standing ? Just by being himself he brakes all conversations and mores .so please dear author keep the chapters flowing!!!😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😊

I have always thought that Cypher was maddeningly shortchanged, and to have you fulfill his true potential makes my toes wiggle in non stop delite!!! So do not stop, and hopefully oh great author you can fulfill this small dream of mine for Cypher. Yours truly, avid reader, John Babcock