Item: The One My Heart Seeks
Rating: 3.6
Author: RD_Hughes

RD_HughesLv24yr

2020-09-18 02:11

There is a great concept to this book. The author understands the feelings of pain and is able to portray that through very relatable characters, and their interactions. The plot is machine gun listed at you, at a blistering speed and I would like the author to slow down and really describe what is going on, instead of just telling the reader. This makes the big plot moments, that are good, seem very sudden and pass just as quickly. PROs: - Great Characters - A very good concept in the story - Very relatable interactions between characters CONs: - Pace is too fast, and misses details. Suggestions: - Better structure of sentences. Especially dialogue - Show the scene more than tell the scene. - Don't use HAHA

The One My Heart Seeks

ALLEY

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ALLEYAuthor

This review will really helo me to improve. I will keep in mind your suggestions.

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Oops! I just remembered that I haven't reviewed your book, silly me and I'm your biggest fan so now back to the book. Seeking you is simply awesome, the angst gives me goosebumps and the sad scenes make me want to cry. When a book touches you that deeply you know that you've bumped into a really good book with a really talented Author. Good work darling❤️❤️

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