So this an honest review:
Writing quality: 4*
Some guy wrote that in the first 15 chapters he only found a typo, thats bs, in the very first sentence there is a mistake (shouting *AT the boy), I've encountered a few dozen in 10 chapters, so that's that. I also haven't seen any above-fourth-grade terms and words being used, but that's ok. 4 stars, pretty decent for this website
Updating quality: 5*
This one is self-explanatory. There are 500 chaps currently.
Story development: 2*
The story is SUPER CLICHE like, an orphan who has been abandoned and their benefactor contracted an illness, and now they're alone to fend off. Apart from being omega cliche it's also unrealistic: 1 in case that happens, to the government isn't going to leave you alone, if they did and the public found out, they would face backlash. Also, in 1st world countries education is obligatory until 16(already where I live), so good luck avoiding school. 2 Does he have no friends?????? He has an above average iq, which might motivate the government to help, but also be has been going to school with absolutely 0 parents not helping after he disappeared? Is everyone there a sociopath? Ok buddy.
Character design: 3*
He meets ex soldier who- no questions, attacks? Okay, I read some more, the system and most characters feel like 2.5D characters, not the worst, but far from the best, very far.
World backgroung: 2*
I said some reasons as to why this wouldn't happen in 1st world countries, even in 2nd world countries this wouldn't happen, I have lost motivation to specify, so yeah.I
Although I only have 3.3 🌟, I would give more due to there being 500 chaps. The rest of the reviews are probably from bots. See ya.
