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John_Smith_3884
John_Smith_3884Lv134yr
2020-10-01 04:29

So as of now there are 15 chapters and I really like this book so far. It is worth it to at least read 15 chapters in this book. Writing quality is really good however I have found one issue in the latest chapter just a typo. Reading this gave me the same feeling I felt when reading the oricole path book. The feeling of having an author that knows what they want to do with this book and they also have the ability to do it. The author has other books and still updates this one more then I thought they would. I really like the story development. The story develops at a nice pace and is not to fast and not to slow. Character design is nice and good in my opinion. The author has yet to describe a character introduced in the latest chapter but I believe it has something to do with how they know each other so I would say that the author is saving it for the explanation which will be in the next chapter. Like I said earlier it feels like the author knows what they are doing and it is wonderful. World background is good. not a lot to say about it. I do like how it changes just a bit after a certain part of the story. Thank you author for writing this wonderful novel. I wish you the best. Live Long and Prosper.

While Others Cultivate, I LVL UP In My Sleep Using The Dungeon System

Adam_A
4.6
560 Chs

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Adam_A
Adam_AAuthor

Thanks alot for the nice review, i will try and keep up to your expectations and keep it up. Thanks for the support and it is very encouraging.

4yr
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Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

I hope it's as good as you said.... ✌️👍

4yr
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THANATOS_
THANATOS_Lv4

Hope that its as good as you said it is. Thanks.

3yr
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HoesB4Bros
HoesB4BrosLv13

SEGGS

3yr
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Demon_Duke_Of_Hell
Demon_Duke_Of_HellLv2

Now there are More than 500 chapters. lol

2yr
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Adam_A
Adam_AAuthor

Another Shameless review, but this time I come with important news. 1) I opened a server. Discord Server: https://discord.gg/TtnGfdKanr 2) The novel is being edited and will be improved when I get time to go back to it

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Ai_Var
Ai_VarLv1

So this an honest review: Writing quality: 4* Some guy wrote that in the first 15 chapters he only found a typo, thats bs, in the very first sentence there is a mistake (shouting *AT the boy), I've encountered a few dozen in 10 chapters, so that's that. I also haven't seen any above-fourth-grade terms and words being used, but that's ok. 4 stars, pretty decent for this website Updating quality: 5* This one is self-explanatory. There are 500 chaps currently. Story development: 2* The story is SUPER CLICHE like, an orphan who has been abandoned and their benefactor contracted an illness, and now they're alone to fend off. Apart from being omega cliche it's also unrealistic: 1 in case that happens, to the government isn't going to leave you alone, if they did and the public found out, they would face backlash. Also, in 1st world countries education is obligatory until 16(already where I live), so good luck avoiding school. 2 Does he have no friends?????? He has an above average iq, which might motivate the government to help, but also be has been going to school with absolutely 0 parents not helping after he disappeared? Is everyone there a sociopath? Ok buddy. Character design: 3* He meets ex soldier who- no questions, attacks? Okay, I read some more, the system and most characters feel like 2.5D characters, not the worst, but far from the best, very far. World backgroung: 2* I said some reasons as to why this wouldn't happen in 1st world countries, even in 2nd world countries this wouldn't happen, I have lost motivation to specify, so yeah.I Although I only have 3.3 🌟, I would give more due to there being 500 chaps. The rest of the reviews are probably from bots. See ya.

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The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4

Reveal spoiler

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Samker
SamkerLv3

Reveal spoiler

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8Eight
8EightLv3

Pretty decent novel which has some nice things going for it. Writing is generally excellent. With only a few mistakes here and there +1 Update stability is very good so far. So good job mr author don't drop it +1 The story reminds me alot of a Korean Manga I read some time ago but the name escapes me. While the story is not super unique I really enjoy this type of story. I like the mostly logical approach he has towards everything. Characters do far are pretty good, for a 19 chapter novel. It has good character development. They are generally likeable and feels pretty human. However with a mostly logical mc I dislike his. I gotta save up to heal my aunt and not buying skills. You know the phrase. Gotta spend money to make money. World is well. The world which has cultivators, which could end up being pretty interesting. Not much else to say here Overall nice and I don't really have much negative to say. Potentially classes once he hit like level 10?

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Zachary_Bozeat
Zachary_BozeatLv14

I am not one of those people who rate novels unfairly, this is a very good one. the character isnt some flimsy person whom only does things when its needed for story reasons. the MC has stuck to his guns, the world has been expanded much beyond what I would have though. there are so many reason to enjoy this novel, so please take a look for yourself and you wont be dissapointed.

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Sailarx
SailarxLv13

This is an amazing story it really brings together my two favorite types of stories (systems and cultivation) what more could anyone possibly want, with an mc that isn't a complete idiot and not too much of an edge lord this story seems to be perfectly balanced. Side characters get a bit of development when its necessary for the plot and it doesn't feel like useless information either. Overall a great read and a good author. now off to check out some of his other works. - - - - - - - - - - - - (∩ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)⊃━☆ﾟ. *

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inflict
inflictLv4

A kind of story that meant to inspire ordinary people living within the elite society. The character design is well planned and well developed. I added this in my library, pls keep on updating!

4yr
Adam_A
Adam_AAuthor

Author here with a cheeky 5 star review, hope you enjoyed. If you did leave a positive comment and vote with power stones. If you find any mistakes feel free to comment them so I know. Thanks for reading.

4yr
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