Review Detail of Ash_Striker in The Feyn

(This review is only of chapters one and two, which was what was written on the date of this review.) This story is gripping, enticing and action-packed. The plot has good pacing, and slows down to develop the characters, but also speeds up for the exciting bits and to create a feeling of urgency. The characters are well-rounded and likable and their actions are true to themselves. Because it is only the first couple chapters, there are still some unanswered questions about the characters' pasts and how they come to be in their circumstances, but we can clearly tell who they are as people. While we aren't given much insight to how this society works, we are given some insights to what their world is like in a simple way. The monsters in this story are also very original and creative, which I did give extra points for. The existence of these monsters and why the majority of the popular doesn't really seem to be aware of their existence has not yet been explained. I would also like to know more about where exactly they live and how it's run, what form of government they have, etc. The descriptions in this story are top-notch and it's easy to visualize. The story is well-written and there are hardly any grammar errors. Although the chapters seem long for webnovel, this story will keep you excited enough to finish the chapter and leave you wanting more! Overall, a very strong start so far. I would recommend for anyone looking for a fantasy action story to check it out. Once this story is completed and I read it till the end, I will write another review that will cover the whole story.