Review Detail of ali_seifi in Dark Rebirth (An ATG Fanfic)

Honestly... Your review makes me think that I should add the fact that Yun Che will be killed in this fic in the synopsis. Also the fact that the story is gonna cannon for some time... Hmm... Just for this fact, I won't delete your review.

Mc gives "the great way of b****" divinie technique to yuanba for no reason while mc's cultivation speed himself is like a turtle compared to yunche. Seems like author want mc interaction with yuanba where yuanba jokingly punch mc and mc was bedridden after that. Or maybe author want to give all mc's girls to yuanba to piss the readers who knows 😐

you forgot the most annoying thing which is ''the mc with an indifferent expression pull down his pants, mc whit cold face rubbed his D, Mc whit an indifferent expression cum, Mc whit chilling eyes pull his pants'' for f**k sake can't he understand that he's not making the mc look badass or cold and calculative but juste a f****g tsundere!

Hmm...over 40 chps and its cannon, mc doing what yun che did and he is wasting time. So far nothing new, just a stupid mc...

I can't..., the author really piss me off. Mc will help yuanba this, yuanba that, oh how dare you do this to yuanba, if i .... yuanba, it will really help yuanba. What The FU*k am i reading, what a piece of sh*t.

this is not ff bro... it's re-edit with different mc taking yunche place ...and everything is same as cannon

thx for saving my time bro

Ur welcome bro, trashfic shouldn't deceive the readers as if it was gold.

Story not that bad actually but the characters really makes people cringe. Mc and girls really not written good. Mc is an asshole worse than yun che. And girls has no character too speak off. You cannot enjoy even story development is good.

so you deleted other low reviews.... makes sense..lol