Review Detail of valoui in Dark Rebirth (An ATG Fanfic)

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yup

"She is pretty but silly" MC thought on cang yue, I think the silly one is him, why would he waste 4 Fcking months studying in a classroom to wait for her to ask him join the tournament. He's A former Fcking Star Good XiSu. Use your brain. Just make some excuse about how he knows her as a princess and not waiting like a moron in a fcking useless classroom of brats without doing any training.

I was debating reading or not but why the F is this guy following Canon so religiously? Is it because he can't think of any original plot so we are forced to read cringe interactions to justify nonsensical actions by the MC? It sure seems like it..

as far as I know, the starting will follow canon before diverging. if MC can get more benefits by following canon for a while then why not. and the steps MC took (except waiting for months which I don't agree but also don't have a problem) are logical

Mc gives "the great way of b****" divinie technique to yuanba for no reason while mc's cultivation speed himself is like a turtle compared to yunche. Seems like author want mc interaction with yuanba where yuanba jokingly punch mc and mc was bedridden after that. Or maybe author want to give all mc's girls to yuanba to piss the readers who knows 😐

If this was a copy and paste, why are people reading it? (Honest question)

I have not read it, I saw the name a long time ago and went directly to see the comments to see if I read it or not. Let's say I don't feel like reading it, although it's fun to go check out the comments from time to time in case someone puts something funny. I have come to break my ass with laughter in some other comment. I always do the same in Against the god fanfiction.

I can't..., the author really piss me off. Mc will help yuanba this, yuanba that, oh how dare you do this to yuanba, if i .... yuanba, it will really help yuanba. What The FU*k am i reading, what a piece of sh*t.

ur fanfic is shit, blah blah blah

Seems like you can't take constructive criticisms, that's why your writing barely improves.

He will have i-n-s-e-s-t-o and he will have many milfs like YC's mother. TO THE GRANDMOTHER OF YC TO THE MOTHER OF XQ among many more?

exactly, you can't just kill the original mc, cuz thats is one of the reasons why we wanted to read fanfic, either you befriend with them or you become their foe or neutral, dont just kill the mc, it'll ruined the the vibes fanfic itself,

shame

ty, glad i don't have to waste my time by reading this ff. Sounds like a retarded MC and i'm tired of them, but i try to deal with it if i have already started reading it.

I have read pass this stupidity and mc becomes better after that, so yeah as long as you can endure this stupidity, the story ahead would be really interesting. [img=recommend]

Thank you for the heads up