I read the story so far as it went. I have many things to say, but I will summarize it in one sentence. *sliding head to ground bow* PLEASE GET A PROOFREADER. Ok. Just so you know, there are many idle people on NU(Novel Updates) that just are searching for some work during quarantine. Of course if you can, pay them a small sum because I'm sure you don't have the funds yet for a better offer. But many newbie proofreaders will help you for free because they want experience. Other than that, I liked the story, although it really reminded me of some of the old animes I watched when I was 16. Story development is also pretty decent ADVICE: Read your chapters multiple times to find if there is any discrepancy or a plot hole. I haven't seen any, but as I said, it needs to be read multiple times before catching it. World background is interesting, and I can say that you can keep it up, just find a proofreader. (This review comes from a grammar Nazi, so don't be sad, pls)
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No problem! I know that the grammar is my week point here not gonna lie (english is not my first language but im trying to get better i swear) I have a friend that does some proof reading but he takes a lot of time to read the chapters so in the end i just read them myself and then I publish it (but I will try to look for one) The plot holes are my biggest worry as i wrote this back in my first year of high school (I wrote it during classes insted of paying attention) Im always reviewing things so i don't create plot holes (specialy with stories like this that are prone to that) But like I always say all critisism is welcome as it helps me get better and everything that helps me getting better is a plus Thanks for your review!
bro, my weakness is also the same as yours! I wondering how you, uhm. How am i going to ask this... Like how you prevent it, like to make the grammatical error is little as possible, are you reading the same chapter over and over again or wait a week then read your chapter without changing it but mark the words you find it wrong, and then you edit it. Would love to see your repliy.
Hello there, my friend! So you want to know how to prevent grammatical errors, right? Well there are a few ways, the main one I use is an app called grammarly, you can go to google search bar, type this name and click on the grammarly website, you make an account there (It's free don't worry about it) and voila! now you can either copy/paste what you wrote in there or write there from the scratch and see the mistakes you made and then you just have to correct them (It's really easy to use the app tells you the mistakes, you just have to click on them and it will change to the apropriate or correct one), you can also ask to someone to read your chapters for you, but I personally don't do this as I don't like to be a bother and ask people to read something when they already have more important things to do (but hey if you got some friends that are free you can ask them to give it a read) And I think that is all, if you need more help with anything feel free to ask, I don't mind helping!
Okay thanks, i'll check it out
