i gotta ask you where did you come up with light, dark, chaos and void elements? as pointed out by others, naruto's world already has so many elements and aspects, why add these? it is just gonna make it all the more confusing and complex. your writing skills are great, its been a while since i have read without seeing grammatical errors every chapter. ig im just not much into too op mc stories, it kinda takes the fun out of it for me. but for those who like op mc, which i think were majority of your readers, i think you should have kept the mc op instead of nerfing him later, or maybe introduce stronger opponents or some roadblock in his progress to even it out a little. good luck
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