Review Detail of iLustForSleep in CONQUER : Dimensional chat group

It's good and all but this is going too fast. One moment they're invited to an unknown chat group. Next, they find out they're actually just work of fictions and that there are multiple dimension. Next, they just reveal their true name, not suspicious if it's a work of an enemy. And then the mc casually asks for some chakra ****, for no reason at all. They're just chatting and BOOM, the mc asks for **** out of nowhere, no build up at all. He doesn't state why he needs them and what he would use it for, maybe he'll use it for evil or good. Also, they are taking this in too fast. They're like "Oh, I'm actually not real and millions of people know all about my personal history, dreams, and future? Okay, that's cool, nice to meet you.". They are not the least shaken at all. But this novel is still at it's development stage and you can better yourself in future chapters. Adios.