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2020-09-09 12:18

Good writing and interaction between the characters. That is what I have observed with the first five chapters I read so far. I can sympathize with the main character for having a bad story background, being unloved and unaccepted. I would think that the story may end in a tragedy, maybe, or not. I always hope that she will have a good fate at the end. About the writing quality of the story, it is good as well. I have to repeat that line because your story is quite easy to read, the words goes well, it describes the interaction and relationships with the characters. The words used in the story clearly describes the story and is very understandable. I have a fun read with this story and may post another review soon. I am not a fan of this genre, but your work has changed my mind. I will keep this in my library. My verdict for the rating is 4.8/5.0. Thank you for reading this review, have a nice day! TradeMaker

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