Review Detail of Vanlord in The Great Demon System
Review detail
Initially is a big copy of My vampire system, then it develops and takes the path which MVS did not take, the way of the brutal revenge murderer. So, the premise is ok but what I find very unnatural in this novel is that basically EVERYONE is a prick. Now one is a good person, literally no one. This is not realistic, I can get that there are people who don't think twice before killing but not every single person, the world is not like this. Then what I do not get is why there is this kind of hate for people of lower social standing? I mean, it can be present but not on these levels, man, here basically everyone hates each other, there is not a single good person but one who died. Essentially what happens is that everything is TOO DAMN FICTIONAL, there is no story immersion because everything it's surreal. When you write a story there must be something in which the reader must be able to relate otherwise it does not make sense to write a story at all. So, the world background is too much similar to MVS, characters are all prick, the story more or less is good but as I said have many downturns. I would not recommend this book but neither say to not read it. This is just to kill time in my opinion. Writing quality is good though.
The Great Demon System
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Man, I do apologize if I seemed rude, I re read the comment and seemed a little bit to harsh. However, make people a little bit more normal, I get that you designed a shitty world and I really appreciated a lot of stuff such as you do not discriminate based on *** and you made females and males do the same shitty or good stuff, as we are all human beings but man your world is too damn extreme. Again, no offese, I know that this may bother you, but I mean no harm.
Drip:The world is meant to be shitty, that was done on purpose and by design because there is a reason for it that will be revealed later on. This is a fictional fantasy story, so being fictional is not entirely bad. People still have their humanity, it's just been corrupted to enhance the negative.
Forgot to say: how the hell can you say that Jayden changed? Just because she made a friend? Wtf the most stupid thing is the fact that she kills and torture people with said friend so actually what changed? She initially bullied everyone and raped everyone, the difference is that she now kills and tortures? She still sees low powered people as piece of thrash so what changed? Than Abby, wtf she appeared more or less normal initially but then she too hates every poor or weak person so why the double situation?
By change I mean around chapter 200. Also, demonstration changes people, and the world is really corrupt for many reasons.
Vanlord:Forgot to say: how the hell can you say that Jayden changed? Just because she made a friend? Wtf the most stupid thing is the fact that she kills and torture people with said friend so actually what changed? She initially bullied everyone and raped everyone, the difference is that she now kills and tortures? She still sees low powered people as piece of thrash so what changed? Than Abby, wtf she appeared more or less normal initially but then she too hates every poor or weak person so why the double situation?
Nononono! I get it! I wasn't trying to be mean either 😣. I was just califiying my thought process. Thank you so much for giving the novel a try! ❤
Vanlord:Man, I do apologize if I seemed rude, I re read the comment and seemed a little bit to harsh. However, make people a little bit more normal, I get that you designed a shitty world and I really appreciated a lot of stuff such as you do not discriminate based on *** and you made females and males do the same shitty or good stuff, as we are all human beings but man your world is too damn extreme. Again, no offese, I know that this may bother you, but I mean no harm.
I'm still reading it, even if I do not like one thing it does not mean I do not like the rest and as for the MVS similarities I would say you went far in an opposite direction so it's not a problem anymore. Keep up with the good stuff ;)
Drip:Nononono! I get it! I wasn't trying to be mean either 😣. I was just califiying my thought process. Thank you so much for giving the novel a try! ❤
Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the rest! I plan on releasing a novel in the future in a more normal world. So I hope that would also be more to your liking ❤.
Vanlord:I'm still reading it, even if I do not like one thing it does not mean I do not like the rest and as for the MVS similarities I would say you went far in an opposite direction so it's not a problem anymore. Keep up with the good stuff ;)