The grammar is great and it looks like it will be a very tense book. I loved the descriptions. Keep up with the good work [img=recommend]👍👍👍

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The intro is interesting enough to keep reading, the writing quality is good and apparently even the consistency with the release.

Man, there is also written on Wikipedia Memento mori (Latin for 'remember that you [have to] die'[2]) is an artistic or symbolic reminder of the inevitability of death.[2] I studied Latin and Greek too for 5 years it's as I'm saying

Well written, great character design, the world looks cool and realistic still having its peculiarities. Then I saw the author is Italian, proud of you man, orgoglio italiano. Continua cosi.

I'm still reading it, even if I do not like one thing it does not mean I do not like the rest and as for the MVS similarities I would say you went far in an opposite direction so it's not a problem anymore. Keep up with the good stuff ;)

Man, I do apologize if I seemed rude, I re read the comment and seemed a little bit to harsh. However, make people a little bit more normal, I get that you designed a shitty world and I really appreciated a lot of stuff such as you do not discriminate based on *** and you made females and males do the same shitty or good stuff, as we are all human beings but man your world is too damn extreme. Again, no offese, I know that this may bother you, but I mean no harm.

Forgot to say: how the hell can you say that Jayden changed? Just because she made a friend? Wtf the most stupid thing is the fact that she kills and torture people with said friend so actually what changed? She initially bullied everyone and raped everyone, the difference is that she now kills and tortures? She still sees low powered people as piece of thrash so what changed? Than Abby, wtf she appeared more or less normal initially but then she too hates every poor or weak person so why the double situation?

Initially is a big copy of My vampire system, then it develops and takes the path which MVS did not take, the way of the brutal revenge murderer. So, the premise is ok but what I find very unnatural in this novel is that basically EVERYONE is a prick. Now one is a good person, literally no one. This is not realistic, I can get that there are people who don't think twice before killing but not every single person, the world is not like this. Then what I do not get is why there is this kind of hate for people of lower social standing? I mean, it can be present but not on these levels, man, here basically everyone hates each other, there is not a single good person but one who died. Essentially what happens is that everything is TOO DAMN FICTIONAL, there is no story immersion because everything it's surreal. When you write a story there must be something in which the reader must be able to relate otherwise it does not make sense to write a story at all. So, the world background is too much similar to MVS, characters are all prick, the story more or less is good but as I said have many downturns. I would not recommend this book but neither say to not read it. This is just to kill time in my opinion. Writing quality is good though.

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