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It's a nice and original story. Through the chapters, the author gives you information about the small details of the MC's survival, such as how much of what did he found and he's going to do with that. It makes you immerse in the story and make calculations as well as if you're there sharing those same resources. Overall, the grammar can be improved. I suggest to the author to check for typos and punctuation issues.
The last one remaining
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Thanks for reading the story and sorry that I couldn't reply before 3 years have already passed. I hope you also like the newer chapters. Also I'm hoping to do a few time skip, as this will become repetative as they are stuck in a shelter for an year. Can you let me know what you think about having a few time skips, after having so detailed description of each day? Thank you for your support it helps a lot.