Ahhh the story is nice and I remembere my first time also writing a story I am just like you too! though don't worry i like the story
and Aja Aja fight fight to us my co-beginner writer hahahhaah
Thank you for your review. And it seems like you are an Indian too so challenge excepted, and if you liked this story then you might like the other novel of mine too, you should give it a try.