Review Detail of Tiffany_JC in Variant Series

I've read a few chapters and really like the story so far. This is my first fantasy story so it took time to get used to the setting. It's also interesting how this is set in the victorian era instead of medieval. Knight and elves mixed with umbrellas and newspapers is such an interesting concept! That being said, I have a few comment. First I'm confused about the timeline. There's a lot of characters around the MC and the story jumps for her past to her present and in between so it takes a while to understand what is happening. I wish that the author would include something to indicate when the chapter is happening, at least using 'young' or 'teenage' to indicate the MC's age. Second, the mix between the use of Moira and Saphrin, the MC's male and female name in the same paragraph can be a bit confusing. It may be the author's choice to indicate which one the character associates with the most but for me, it's confusing. Especially in the first few chapters. I still don't see where the story will lead to but I'll be sure to catch up to the latest chapter! Good luck author!