Read up to chapter 21 The story has just begun and so far it has really become very engaging. The writing quality is rather good and readable. Some small grammatical mistakes but nothing to really talk about. Theres also a lot of local terminology which if you are not a native of india or so you wouldn’t understand. Fortunately the author also understood this and helps with providing information either as context clues or in a “authors note”. As for the updates is has been pretty consistent with a chapter every day which a good amount of word count. The story does move along at a decent pace and some chapters theres no movement at all due to some important information being disclosed. As for the main character, I wont spoil much but he can be a type of dislike while liking him. Hes not the perfect person in a sense in where the things he does might confuse you but rather funny in some ways. The way he moves around the new world can be seem as arrogant but it can’t be helped considering he has many advantages. The character development is still proceeding since its only been 21 chapters but theres much potential as he grows to be more famous. There are some issues as to what his true goals are and why. Does he want to be number 1? Also why does he want to be number 1? In the first chapter you see his dreams and wants but not as to why he wants it or basically the motive. I would suggest giving the novel a chance for the first 5 chapters. Things start to pick up when he starts using his system abilities and his knowledge about the entertainment system.
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