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Sage_of_Heaven2yrCommentedCh 41 To act like adult- Sage_of_Heaven2yrCommentedCh 28 Auction Part 1
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Hello this is a very good story. I have question have you ever thought of posting this story on Alternative History. Since you will gain more reader there. Also here is my suggestion if you decide to post the story there. You should upload one chapter per day to slowly build a reader base instead of uploading the whole story at once.
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Hello author I really enjoy your story,but I have critique for this story. -The story is very slow pace. Usually this will not be a problem for me,but I have hard time getting through chapter due to how slow it is. -The Romance feel rush. I felt that there should have been more time developing the romance aspect. -Author you have a problem of over explaining the dialogue. This contribute to the story feeling slow and boring for me. Well that all my critique for this if you fix these issue. You will certainly create one of the best or the best One Piece Fanfic that I ever read. But you have to overcome challenges like the Fanfic This Bite. Well who know you might surpass that story someday and became my number one favorite one piece fanfic. Well that all have a wonderful day and good luck.ππππ
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Love his free workout plan ππ
At the very least, I could change his looks thankfully, except the eyes. They were a bright molten gold colour and couldn't be edited at all. Well whatever. I was always a short, stocky kind of guy so I went with a similar build, only dialed up to eleven. I gave myself quite a lot of bulk, powerful, thick muscles, rippling biceps and chiselled abs. Honestly, I took them up to nearly as high as they could go, none of that lean swimmer build bullshit, and only didn't go further because the aesthetic of the muscles looked best at that point. Swoll as fuck, but not bulging muscles that got so big they looked oddly shaped. Then I increased my height just a couple inches from the same height I am because...well, sometimes it helps to be able to reach the top shelf without having to tip toe. And I finished up with some simple black and shaggily spikey medium length hair..because apparently the only options were various states of long hair or bald. And I don't wanna be bald.detailA Blazing Fist (Gamer Insert - Starting in Avatar The Last Airbender)Anime & Comics Β· 0_Jordinio_0 - Sage_of_Heaven2yrCommentedCh 17 Important
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Campione please
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Great fanfic and have a nice dayππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Thank you for the chapter
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