Review Detail of kankup4 in Overlord: The Origin

well idea and plot aren't that bad for Fan-fic now what's good and what's bad the plot is kinda cool but sometimes boring :( I don't know what it is but sometimes I just skip parts of chapter :( the wishes thing is not bad definitely better than wishing some OP thing and then the whole plot flops or just transforms in total crackfic In my opinion, A/N is kinda useless in story you can write it in comments... soo to sum it up : not bad could use some editing in my opinion