awesome as ever I have question about the next worth with will probably be fate and probably grand order timeline (solomon) what about altera (veber), gaia, counter force, types, beasts, alien god, I suppose the best way to deal with it would be to ignore them 0.0 ...

Well great dragon ball novel I think author created a very nice protagonist with few plot holes that is quite smart. Im very happy that author was able to find his mistakes by himself (in the last chapter) and acknowledge them ! Overall awesome dragon ball fanfic and one of my favorites!

thanks

i dont get it... the treasure!

that's ... a lot of flaws in his domain if even the visit to secret realm still left some flaws

i don't see the problem with the new website :D

dont forget about the sword!!

awesome chapter I just chope there won't be a Jor-El Gold coming from the dead that would be a ... bad writing :)

awesome chapter I think that you have reason and you can come to this story when hxh will have more content so maybe in like 20 years :D ? or when author of the original dies and you will be able to spin what ever you want ( MAD SNAIL I AM LOOKING AT YOU who makes 1 chapter per month?)

since you stated that Mikasa new hatsu is not op then, in my opinion, its overall loss you could have made Mikasa into many things such as : -Alluka Zoldyck/Nanika V.2.0 -Sparing partner that actually won't backstab you (Goku and Vegeta) -owner of the noble phantasm/creature from Nasuvarse -future reader V.2.0(Neon Nostrade) while yes some of these abilities you can't achieve while being conjurer as we saw with kurapika this hardly end of the road + materials from dark continent + compass and now you made here in nothing but doll you can study...

well idea and plot aren't that bad for Fan-fic now what's good and what's bad the plot is kinda cool but sometimes boring :( I don't know what it is but sometimes I just skip parts of chapter :( the wishes thing is not bad definitely better than wishing some OP thing and then the whole plot flops or just transforms in total crackfic In my opinion, A/N is kinda useless in story you can write it in comments... soo to sum it up : not bad could use some editing in my opinion