It's really good story and I enjoy it, but when I got to "betrayal" it goes downhill. it wasn't betrayal it was more like disobedience, and also it was poorly executed. I think it was good if you just leave them be and let them realise that it was there loss that they leave the crew, no need for killing/bloodshed for that kind of thing. Its only my opinion thou and good luck writing author. Sorry for my bad english
TheEnlightenedSage
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