Review Detail of B0ssu in One Piece: Finally Free

The story's concept is a good one. A MC without system hax travels the One Piece world and largely renders Luffy's journey meaningless. The author also has a better grasp of English than most of the authors on this site. That's about all the good things I can say for this story. Power levels and competency of the various characters are inconsistent. The original arcs are nowhere near the quality of Oda-sensei's stuff, and consist of a bunch of cliches and asspulls that go on far too long in an attempt to create tension. The number of characters renders most of them background characters at best or outright OOC. The plot largely moves by asspulls, and the antagonists are magical teleporting plot devices that are as effective as needed to move the plot along. The MC wavers between a stereotypical edgy psychopath, an arrogant anime villain and a tsundere spineless jellyfish, and comes across as little more than a mishmash of tropes rather than an actual character. I normally don't say this about fanfics, but faithfully following the stations of canon would have been better than this mess.