webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of Idealist in One Piece: Finally Free

Review detail

Idealist
IdealistLv133yrIdealist

I was utterly disappointed when I read chapter 66-70 about betrayal thingy. Poorly executed, and if you think that disobedience = betrayal. Might as well you should have a doll instead of nakama. Coz after this shit, I deduce that author didn't knew how this society work in this real life or "jungle world" where the mc in. If you think that they would remain loyal after those harsh punishments (to slash a hand, feet, and moreover a woman's face). You may be wrong. And for reason some of "gender equality" excuse to punch his women's face (nakama) is just bullshit and nonsense for me. Then what about a joke when all his woman's crew beating him when he was joking. isn't that betrayal??? So when those plot of three of women (robin, mikita, and zala) want to recruit perona is considered betrayal for him. it was so laughable for me for this inconsistence, unstable mind of MC. Yeah you could write as you like and but I had my right to write a very bad review for you. Please learn about "nakama" meaning to improve your story.

altalt

One Piece: Finally Free

TheEnlightenedSage

Liked by 41 people

LIKE

Replies1

AwpDrag0n
AwpDrag0nLv1AwpDrag0n

bro they attacked him with real intent is serious, when others attack it is usually a joke or a test of power and they stop right after, he asked them to stop there and they didn’t want to, this is literally betrayal