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Review Detail of Vostarian in One Piece: Finally Free

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Vostarian
VostarianLv43yrVostarian

Here I'm am giving a review. I first thought that I reviewed your novel, but looking around I didn't. Sorry, Sage. I'll first come and say to future people who would stumble upon my review, this novel is worth reading. The story follows a well-established plot, not abating from that. The MC even if Sage likes to say he's not truly overpowered. But who cares, everyone likes an overpowered character as long is bound to the logic of the story. As you go and read forward you'll see his writing improvements, him trying to develop his characters, as much that he can. But at least he did it. He didn't do an asspull like 70% of fanfics about One Piece are doing around. For example, reincarnate in canon time, after that you have 2 paths, you steal all straw hats except for Luffy, or be part of the straw hats. I mean come on where's the fan in the fanfic if you just follow canon blindly. Well, in conclusion, give this novel a try, you already have a lot of chapters to get addicted to. .............................................................................................. Ahem, I'll also be a shameless thief and try to steal some readers from here, don't mind me, Sage. I'm a new writer around here that also does a One Piece fanfic, that follows the journey of Vlad the Impaler (Dracula) in the One Piece world. Go give it a try guys, the novel also has chicks going around(that's for the simps).

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One Piece: Finally Free

TheEnlightenedSage

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TheEnlightenedSage
TheEnlightenedSageAuthorTheEnlightenedSage

Thank you for reminding me how great my novel is. For that reason I'll allow your self promoting.

Vostarian
VostarianLv4Vostarian

Your only recent chapters(last 15-20 chapters) reached the "great novel" status. That's what I think about your boast. Anyway, we still have a lot to improve on our game strategy. P.S those that read this conversation, don't forget to tag in my novel (One PIece: Chronicles of a Betrayed - From Blood to Sea )

TheEnlightenedSage:Thank you for reminding me how great my novel is. For that reason I'll allow your self promoting.
FakasMadasOMG
FakasMadasOMGLv3FakasMadasOMG

So... he is OP? xD. Tell me pls

Vostarian
VostarianLv4Vostarian

Yep, he's OP. Not over the top OP, but compared to the other characters at the starting point he is. If you're referring to Sage MC. Mine is weak-strong type. Where he slowly gets OP.

FakasMadasOMG:So... he is OP? xD. Tell me pls
Kurigohan
KurigohanLv5Kurigohan

Who romantic interest? Or this fic no romance ?

Vostarian:Yep, he's OP. Not over the top OP, but compared to the other characters at the starting point he is. If you're referring to Sage MC. Mine is weak-strong type. Where he slowly gets OP.
Vostarian
VostarianLv4Vostarian

His story doesn't have that much romance. But from what I remember, MC love interest is an OC character. P.S: You have to read a lot to find out what's with the romance. But it's not the focus of the story anyway so it doesn't affect it that much.

Kurigohan:Who romantic interest? Or this fic no romance ?
parth_anandpara
parth_anandparaLv1parth_anandpara

I liked your story about vlad. It good and all. Only wanted to ask why did you choose a deranged madman of our past times who literally drank blood as a protagonist? And why made him sane?

Vostarian:His story doesn't have that much romance. But from what I remember, MC love interest is an OC character. P.S: You have to read a lot to find out what's with the romance. But it's not the focus of the story anyway so it doesn't affect it that much.