Review Detail of Gaure in Memories Like a Dagger

I believe in constructive criticism, especially when rating the work of a fellow author, so I would like to give you some advice as well. :) First of all, the story is quite mysterious but it catches the reader's attention early on! The idea of other tribes recognizing themselves as the "Humans" instead of designating that term to us, is a very intriguing concept. I have to say, amazing. However, you seem to have overlooked a few mistakes in the beginning and should therefore reread your content. It is a crucial skill to be able to realize your mistake and grow from them as a writer and I am trying to help you do that. Quite a number of grammar errors here and there, the story structure tends to be quite vague so please spend more time developing the setting as much as you do to characters, and that's pretty much it really. It's a beautiful story. Keep up the good work, my friend!