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JustLikeWriting777
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2021-09-16 13:00

I've been reading this story for quite sometime and I must say, I am intrigued by the plot. In fact, the story itself can catch a person's eye. All characters are well-described and different, each with an entertaining personality. Overall, I'll keep on reading and eagerly wait for new chapters!

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SolAce
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Thanks, this was very comforting to see! Mainly because I had a really terrible posting schedule, so I had supposed that most would be dissuaded or had given up on the novel. I hope to make some time for myself after settling into college to write to my heart’s content. Whether it’s a year or two later, I swear I’ll finish this book the way I have in mind.

JustLikeWriting777
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I'll be honest, it can get hard to keep up with all this writing. I totally know the stress of it lol. Take your time to finish the book. I'm sure a lot of readers will agree that they'll eagerly wait for it to continue into a beautiful ending. [img=recommend]

SolAce:Thanks, this was very comforting to see! Mainly because I had a really terrible posting schedule, so I had supposed that most would be dissuaded or had given up on the novel. I hope to make some time for myself after settling into college to write to my heart’s content. Whether it’s a year or two later, I swear I’ll finish this book the way I have in mind.
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Tangerqueen
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Honestly, I rarely give 5 star reviews and only when I think a book really deserves it. I haven't binge read something on this site for soooo long, and if all the books on here were like this one, I'd have so much more respect for it ;-; Writing Quality: Literally the prologue got me going like 0.0 It was just so beautifully put together? Like I'm not quite sure how to put it to words, but the moment I realized what the analogy was actually saying, I was low-key shook. That being said, there wasn't a single spot in this novel that wasn't beautifully polished such that every word felt like it had to be there. The tensions in the action scenes lived up to my expectations, as did the heart-warming ones. Story Development: If it wasn't for how clear your writing was, I think I would be lost with the switching between memories and reality sorta chapters. But literally because of how you set the mood and tone of the chapters depending on the emotions you were trying to convey, I had no issue going from mindset to mindset. Also, I think it actually made the current picture seem even more haunting with the juxtapositions. Character Design: Whistle. Enough said and more than enough reason for me to give a 5/5 for this. World Background: How do I put this. Not only do you describe the cells in a way that you make me want to punch the people (if you can even call them that) that put them there. But you also describe what seemed to be a utopia before it was corrupted, somehow making me want to punch them even more. Overall, I really want to say that this is a freakin gem. From the superrrr aesthetic cover art to the beautiful analogies and the story itself, I really really wish Webnovel would advertise your story more. Although it's still currently pretty sure, I think this novel would be one that actually somehow made an impact on me considering Webnovel as a platform. I think this is the first story I've added to my library from browsing the forums, but geez I'm glad I did!

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