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Look I;ll be honest, on a writing basis, this bk is decent and deserves 4 stars but I am giving this 1 star due to extremely retarded **** that happens here. And also to the false/misinformed reviews People have given this 5 stars for description and I thought it was about characters, emotions and the world, but no,,this description is about the torture MC goes through, like having worms and insects put in his ass and penis, Having the face smashed into toilets and ****,,yah. Thats the amount of torture this MC goes through and no one notices this....not even MC's closet friend, and when she notices she dosnt even look into it, retarded considering how the writer mentions how they were friends for 10 yrs...she dosnt care about her closet friends life.. And MC, my god,,,after all the mind fk and physical torture he goes through that would literally match the scenes from the overlord LN or the SAW movie, he still cares for the chick and has a rational and functioning mind. So be warned to anyone that reads this. Also author delete this an I'll spam u..jesus man, I didnt expect this when I read MihVic review or ur summary,,,, expected some cliche sad ****,,,not this SAW ****. I get fiction BUT why the hell did u put this illogical and senseless **** here?
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I appreciate your thoughts but look its fiction, Ren is a mentally unstable character who put himself on a throne and thinks of himself as a sort of a king who can do as he pleases with others, Hana is a more complex character whose actions and mindset will be explained later on (she noticed what was happening to him but didn't react due to reasons that will be explained later on.) Yuki is a loner who's the world was made around his love for Hana, after that love shattering it was supposed to show how wrong his point of view was and just wanting the suffering he found himself in to end. This chapter was just supposed to show three characters who would be very important for the story later on, and the mc's suffering and point of view, I had some fun and went a little overboard so I apologize if I disgusted you.
no u didnt disgust,....u horrified me. also hello,,,,I sorry but I did explain my reasons...and its nice u explained rather than ignoring. But I am interested in what happens next but I want to know if hana or any of the mentioned female character will be a lover, cause then I want to drop...could u warn me?
Yukina_Miu:I appreciate your thoughts but look its fiction, Ren is a mentally unstable character who put himself on a throne and thinks of himself as a sort of a king who can do as he pleases with others, Hana is a more complex character whose actions and mindset will be explained later on (she noticed what was happening to him but didn't react due to reasons that will be explained later on.) Yuki is a loner who's the world was made around his love for Hana, after that love shattering it was supposed to show how wrong his point of view was and just wanting the suffering he found himself in to end. This chapter was just supposed to show three characters who would be very important for the story later on, and the mc's suffering and point of view, I had some fun and went a little overboard so I apologize if I disgusted you.
Yukina_Miu:It's not such a spoiler but none of the classmates will be his lovers, he has no such feeling towards any of them. Hana especially! Resons will be explains later on😋
I'll say one thing and that's that this isn't a revenge sort of a story, now I'm not saying they won't get what they deserve(which they will) but saying any more is spoiler territory
amaturewriter:oh good, revenge? some GOT **** that'll even scare ramsay ? cause they fking deserve it
Yukina_Miu:I'll say one thing and that's that this isn't a revenge sort of a story, now I'm not saying they won't get what they deserve(which they will) but saying any more is spoiler territory