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Amon91
Amon91Lv43yr
2020-12-28 04:42

It was good until he accepted cang yue confession. It became sort of annoying. i hope you the author can do better later to composate this thing.

Invincible System in ATG (Hiatus)

Charan56
4.7
46 Chs

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Evil_Duke
Evil_DukeLv1

Why do you hate cang yue so much.. She is sincere to Yun che and waits for him like an ideal wife.. ITs the Yun Che bastard fault to make her look like a burden and useless in the orginal work.

3yr
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Amon91
Amon91Lv4

i do not hate her it's the situation who make it annoying

Evil_Duke:Why do you hate cang yue so much.. She is sincere to Yun che and waits for him like an ideal wife.. ITs the Yun Che bastard fault to make her look like a burden and useless in the orginal work.
3yr
Evil_Duke
Evil_DukeLv1

But in this fanfic Cang Yue looked sweet though

Amon91:i do not hate her it's the situation who make it annoying
3yr
Amon91
Amon91Lv4

yeah but it's annoying how he did it

Evil_Duke:But in this fanfic Cang Yue looked sweet though
3yr
Evil_Duke
Evil_DukeLv1

I didn't get you...

Amon91:yeah but it's annoying how he did it
3yr
Amon91
Amon91Lv4

ok

Evil_Duke:I didn't get you...
3yr
Other Reviews
Eom
EomLv4

Every thing was good until MC accepted Cang yue's confession, I mean it was so unnecessary to accept that confession that I don't even wan't to read anymore he know that jasmine liked him but he still accepted her confession was really cringe I mean she not worthy of MC no matter who say I am not going to accept that she is just going to be MC's pet that need to feed cultivation resources and have S** with and thats it I think author really made a bad decision to accept her as first harem member so I just want to say author thanks until this time with that move you did there every thing over for me(you know I read so many atgs fanfics so I can see future direction of your story in atg universe so with turn you did here harem of this story made story over for me). Because of language barrier I can't express what I have in my mind so if the things I write here is heavy sorry fo that.

4yr

Itachi_Hyoudou
Itachi_HyoudouLv4

The story is great. Love it❤️❤️. But if you drop this like your last against the gods story, then I am gonna find you and force you write 100 chapters straight. Understand?

4yr
Weirdo
WeirdoLv6

Please.... Please give us the satisfaction of slapping the arrogant face of the ice b1tch!!! Make her regret so much that she feel like she had poop inside her ancestor urn....

4yr
daniel_rahn
daniel_rahnLv2

This is a Great novel You should definetly go check it out, first of all the mc avoid all wunxia cliches and simp situations, he is being OP with the time and so Far he can beat tyrants tier level cultivators and he is not Even a throne, when he get to the divine realm he Will probably bitch slap them without worry The story and interacctions are well and the girls he Will add in the harem are just the few useful, that means he Will not leave them while he is in his Journey like the OG jun che Really good without all that wunxia drama so Far, You should really check this out, totally worth it

4yr
Kutu
KutuLv4

This is simply a work of art. A good MC that thinks with his head ? ✅ Actual Love Progress ? ✅ System that is actually useful ? ✅ OP Cheats ? ✅ NO System Punishment for Missions ? ✅

4yr
LeyAn99
LeyAn99Lv4

I don't really usually comment on the stories I read, not for anything in particular, but I can't help but comment on the great amount of joy that reading this work has brought me so far, when it comes to ATG I've always felt bad I use that fanfics give to the character of Yun che because I think that if you know how to use this character you can give a lot of ideas for very interesting and funny stories This kind of plot with this new yun che is simply incredible and I can't help but wait like an addict for the new chapter I would like to congratulate the author for the hidden work of art that he has left on this site and I wish him the best of encouragement to continue this great story My sincere thanks to the author

4yr
PARADOXICAL
PARADOXICALLv2

Like most xianxia novels logic does not apply to this one too, just a 10x more illogical. Also I can't even understand wtf is going on without reading it twice or more.

3yr
creepycatisawesone
creepycatisawesoneLv3

Well You can read the other reviews and you would get the idea. Simply Said. This is the best ATG Fanfic out there. I have read many of them. But this is truly the best. So what is better than the other ones?? Writing Quality ... The story is written in proper english, No shitty grammatical errors. No He/She errors. Perfect but easy to understand word flow. The flow is so well, I didn't even realise when I covered all the chapters.( and for the haters... It's was not because of words. Each chapter had at least 1500-2000 words for sure but I didn't count) Character Design is actually the best part as the Yun Che of the story is the best ever. Each character acts the way you would expect them to act actually if that event would have happened. System too is good as it is a system of the person and the person is not a slave of the system. There are no penalties. Quests are given but are for the benefit of Yun Che himself and he is not forced to accept them. He can refuse them. The shop part is very funny. But it's a secret for you. Next ... Well there are more points but I gotta go. So I recommend the story to any and everyone . C YA

4yr
Number1Fan
Number1FanLv14

One of the better ATG fanfic that have rad till now with a down to earth mc who is humble and not horndog compared to the original mc. The relationship between mc and the characters also feels a lot more genuine. Overall I recommend this to anyone looking for a good ATG fanfic.

4yr
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