Review Detail of BrianGallacher7 in Blue Phoenix
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at begining it states very clearly how difficult it is to progress in cultivation but that is disproved even quicker than its explained by chapter 9 his 2 friends are already at disciple level and MC meets Guards at a singular tiny city that are Duke level. if they are guards then the master of city needs to at least be at king level. for a cultivation novel with 90 levels (10 rank each rank being divided into 9) and MC already meeting people in levels at minimal 54 it truly doesn't show difficulty in progression in cultivation of their are so many that they can be little guards in a singular city ?
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when MC gets the courtyard 1009 it is unbearablly confusing on what's going on 1 what is the significance of the number that caused the book keeper to react that way 2 is it the lower the never the better the courtyard 3 in any other novel the mc is given at least a week to a month to get use to the rules and environment before getting challenged due to a courtyard 4 when MC entered the school it said he saw thousands of houses for people attending the school but now it's changed to what I read as being 10 per mountain rediculous waste of space 5 his so called friends should have at least escorted him to the location instead of letting a 10 year old find it himself 6 the friends stated that highest level their is Duke but now their is a sudden king rank and MC does t even react
BrianGallacher7:when MC gets the courtyard 1009 it is unbearablly confusing on what's going on 1 what is the significance of the number that caused the book keeper to react that way 2 is it the lower the never the better the courtyard 3 in any other novel the mc is given at least a week to a month to get use to the rules and environment before getting challenged due to a courtyard 4 when MC entered the school it said he saw thousands of houses for people attending the school but now it's changed to what I read as being 10 per mountain rediculous waste of space 5 his so called friends should have at least escorted him to the location instead of letting a 10 year old find it himself 6 the friends stated that highest level their is Duke but now their is a sudden king rank and MC does t even react
ya and also how u keep going until u point out all the flaws lol writing so many comments i do the same for some reason
BrianGallacher7:what do you mean are you referring to what you find anoying about the novel
it improve the writers writing try reading super detective in a fictional world it is somewhat enjoyable set in marvel and other worlds combined but MC has limited knowledge as was originally from china
Universal_Monarch:ya and also how u keep going until u point out all the flaws lol writing so many comments i do the same for some reason