The writing style of the author is kinda jarring, the sentences don't flow and there are times where I need to reread a sentence. It disturbs my reading immersion and just lowers the quality of the novel. Idk about you guys but the grammar and just the way an author writes sentences plays a big part in my reading experience, hence why I rated this low. I'm also rating this lower just to balance the rating of the novel since I've noticed that most of the reviews aren't proper reviews at all.
MidGard
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LIKEThe grammar is alright. But the way the sentence flow is indeed a little weird. The author also tends to use commas ( , ) at the most weirdest place. But I'm still in the early chapters. Hope the words placements gets better as I read on.
S3ntinel:I dont know what you mean the grammar of this novel is one of the best on this platform
redkingtfk:The grammar is alright. But the way the sentence flow is indeed a little weird. The author also tends to use commas ( , ) at the most weirdest place. But I'm still in the early chapters. Hope the words placements gets better as I read on.
Trueeee like I couldn't really stand reading the novel anymore because of the weird way the author structures their sentences, it keeps me from getting immersed in the story. I also wanted to give it a chance so I read past a few more ch until the paywall, yet nothing changed so I decided to drop it.
redkingtfk:The grammar is alright. But the way the sentence flow is indeed a little weird. The author also tends to use commas ( , ) at the most weirdest place. But I'm still in the early chapters. Hope the words placements gets better as I read on.
S3ntinel:I dont know what you mean the grammar of this novel is one of the best on this platform
sure, since you're reading this I'm just gonna assume that you're ok with this genre. -Mother of learning (action with mystery, it reminds me of the movie groundhog day) -The oracle paths (action, sci-fi, apocalypse) -My house of horrors (obviously horror and thriller -Plague doctor (horror and thriller, the mc is a doctor) -Lord of the mysteries (steampunk fantasy transmigration, good world building) -Paragon of destruction (action xianxia fantasy) -Reverend of Insanity (cultivation, action, anti-hero mc) These are the ones that I remember are already here on webnovel.
S3ntinel:Can you recommend me good novels ?
I personally disagree, but I respect your opinion. I personally think that everything flows perfectly and it was easier for me to read than any other story on this platform. The writing style of this author is admirable, in my opinion. I do understand the part where you had to re-read a sentence, for me it was only one or two.