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Bloom759
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2020-08-17 07:41

Unlike some who would just drop a "I love your story so much!", Well except if they've reviewed your book before then it's fine. I'll go straight to the point. I love the setting your story portrays(mystery and a bit horror) I'm not really into the whole horror genre but I am into Mystery, a particular story made me venture into horror/mystery stories and I can say yours have pulled me in as well . The prologue had an air of Mystery to it, like who was in the picture? And I'm not gonna hide this, ⚠️warning to all who have a soft heart like me, read at your heart's risk 🤣🤣🤣 just kidding (no seriously, I'm not!!!😬) I was kinda spooked out "a little" visualizing it, good thing I'm in reality 😐 and these are just fictional. Phew! There were a little grammatical errors and some unintentional non capitalization of the "I"(wow, look at me criticising! I'm a victim of this too 🙈). Do you all(readers) want: A story which gives you steady dose of adrenaline into your bloodstream? A story which isn't predictable? A story that turns you into a detective? A story which makes you develop phobias you never thought you had? A story which makes you glad it isn't real?🤣 All being said, keep up the good work and I'll keep my heart rate in check(kidding once more, or am I?)

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Bloom759
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I hope this review does justice to your book in some way and keeps the desperate review seekers in check 😅😅 Thanks for the review on my book by the way

meixiaolian
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thank youuuuuu :))))))) I'll edit it, thank you for pointing it out bloom :))))))))

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