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2020-12-28 11:12

Really surprised by the uniqueness of the overall concept and the storyline itself. I very much enjoy the interactions between the characters and how the author vividly described their physical attributes and personalities. I like how each is being given spotlight. Just be careful with the punctuation marks as they affect the fluidity of the story, but that's just a minor detail. It's really a great read! Good start as well. Keep it up, author!

Black In the Water

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Thank you so much! 🧡🥺

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Can’t believe I’m doing this but here goes... Shameless author here! 🥰 I’ve worked so hard on this particular piece of literature so I need this to gain more recognition! I believe once you start reading you won’t be able to stop (not to toot my own horn but I mean *shrug* it ain’t a lie). If you enjoy adventurous mystery with A LOT of romance then this is the book for you! Pleace take the time to review and maybe even give ** (?) Hahaha 🧡

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betweenthelines
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This book is different than any I’ve ever read before because it plays in a mixture of both mystery and romance. I love how the character’s histories play a part in the reasons why they live in this building. Keep up the good work!

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martyscosmos
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I love the way the author has captured each character’s personality through the different point of views. I personally can’t wait to read more of this book! Please publish more! 🧡🧡🧡

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LittolSol
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The fact that every person has their own personality gives the story a really interesting path. Especially in this place where two-sided overpowered characters reign supreme, it's a great change of pace when you actually feel like the character runs the story, not the author.

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